In the Original Matrix, two ‘mistakes’ happen.
One, the claim that humans generated electric with no input energy is impossible.
The other, Neo used magic powers on squids outside the Matrix.
IF THEY MADE THE NEW MATRIX SEQUEL RIGHT IT WOULD HAVE OPENED:
-Running and stumbling scene of a bunch of Matrix people, doing a tactical retreat, behind garbage and pillars down a subway, as chased by only slightly overwhelming forces of squids-
Neo’s inner voice Narrator,”We should have known.”
Narrator,”We knew, but we should have known.”
Narrator,”Humans don’t make energy without an energy input. I can’t use powers in true Earth. We just in another layer of the Matrix! “
cut to:
-Some shouting commands for tactics,shooting, people making fun choreographed hits or tuck and rolls-*
-A tech type character notices on local radar, “yo something big’s coming! I think we should book it”-
Neo replies,”Yo,we’re already booking it. What is it, how big?”
-Tech starts scootching back slightly advancing his pace in the tactical retreat,”I don’t know what it is, but it’s big, and there’s a LOT of them. I really think we should book it!
Neo shouts,”EVERYONE, WE GOTTA BOOK IT!“
A girl or tank character goes,”We already booking it!”
Neo shouts really LOUD,”BOOK IT AS HARD AS YOU CAN!!!“
-Then the whole crew starts running full retreat from a tactical retreat-
-Whatever big threat busts through the walls of subways, crushing through the debris and stuff they were hiding in, accelerating at them, just obliterating the walls and ceiling-
Just as the threat is about to get them, they get to the end of the subway tunnel, which leads to a huuuuge fall down a collossal tech shaft with lights, auras and other techno dazzle.
-Everyone stops at the edge, some wavering to induce vertigo in some theatre viewers not seeing the bottom of the shaft, others showing visible concern ‘not quite fear’-
-just before the big threats carving up pavement,walls,ceiling and all the garbage,pillars and lights in between the tunnel certainly grind them up-
Narrator,”If only we would have known what we already knew, things wouldn’t have gotten this far out of control. Dammit why don’t we think!”
-Everyone jumps down –
That’s how it should have been done, Fix the plot errors of the first Matrix, and open freaking bad ass, but we live in Cancel culture era, it’d probably be changed on the cutting floor to foreign countries.
Why do I post this? This is the type of writing you should be expecting in Starfighter General come February. We’re still on pace for a patch this week or next And February towards the end, we should have some plots in. I study story writing and movie making, thank you MST3K, and I have so much creativity welled up in me, I can’t wait to release. Software architecture is very logical and takes a lot of time. You cannot express your creativity until you do thousands or tens of thousands of hours of work… It’s an incredible frustrating, yet passionate experience. People have told me my current storyline is better than most every sci fi even better than Starwars and Startrek in their peak… I’m not too sure, but I have a HARD hitting storyline, better than 99.995% of video games, easy. Lets go, power your base up, be ready!





























